Sexy Soldier

[chonfat]

CnC please and ik that my text BLOWS T.T

[ascheb]

its a beginning. I think it needs some blending and some lighting... the effects dont really mesh with what u have going on here. There are some awesome tuts around here that could show you how to pic the right kinds of backgrounds to go with ur renders and how to make em blend well Keep postin and keep workin at it! And if text is a struggle for u then leave it off for now and just work on improving ur gfx skills and add text later once u get more advanced

[chonfat]

kk thx anymore CnC?

[TricerX]

Yeah you've got something to work with. Dont like the c4d doesnt blend well maybe it doesnt even need one? some other kind of effect and it would be much better

[mecca]

agree, try to use some solid c4d instead of effect, text also could be better imho.
keep it coming m8

[Wolvy]

it seems to be lacking effects, but doesnt look that bad

[chonfat]

thx guys and yea ill try to fix this stuff up cause i havnt gfx for so long but yea ill try!

[Gaaf]

Get rid of tha white soft brush, and use: filter>render>lightning effects.
this will improve the lightning and depth on this tag .
U also need some more effects, and difrent effect becouse this looks like one c4d pasted on the canvast on "screen"
get some bubble c4ds in there . Remove the text it doesnt look to well in this one, as said above when u get better in text than u can add some
So fix lightning and depth and add some more effects and work on text/remove it and i think u have a fine tag man