new siggy...

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[Rexy.]

I think the c4d's look a bit too sharp, other than that its not too bad

[TricerX]

I like this. Nice use of color with the c4d's.

[Gaaf]

Yep the c4d's are a bit to sharp, and they dont realy have a centrain flow
Try to get it flow with the render a bit more,
also next time try to place your render not in the middle,
i can see improvements soft