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    I am not a big fan of this... think its one of my worst in awhile i couldnt grasp what i wanted from it... i had to stop and just step back from it... cause im just lost with it now




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    Nice . Looks sorta like the white flower is kinda pushing the render out of the focal area but you did a good job of making the whole thing work for the most part. Maybe make the render more centered if u can and sharpen it a tad.



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    I looks alright...
    The white flower was a nice idea but I think the flower should be in a different position.. so we are looking into it if you know what I mean? Or.. you move it behind the bushes.. and make the bushes the foreground.
    Then reduce the size of the white flower.

    also.. needs some sharpening up in places and a bit of back lighting.
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    super messy, render is a bit lq, no lighting, not blended well.

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    looks like you used exposure? if u did try re moving that or messing with it a bit more because your colors look faded and makes it lq . i like the concept you have here and the effects of this tag so best of luck on this tag , would like to see a v2 on this. oh yeah and i would give it a light sorce you don't have any looks like its coming from the top left to the botom right midsection .
    Last edited by sirenzo; 07-18-2011 at 08:13 AM.


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    I think this would look way better with out the ugly dak/black stuff.
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    the layer that makes it look so whack is the light source apply image>render>light effects= ew... Yeah this whole tag needs a redo haha its defo one of my worst in awhile... sometimes my creativity stretches beyond what I can do-- or what resources I have-- thx all



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