another transformer

[PhobiaRED91]

the top one has a light source by i like the second one better
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[+s9.Oath]

umm i dont like either really man i dunno why you have all those lines over your tag at all i think you were trying a style but didnt get the right effect on it keep workin with the style you will get it try some clipping masks on them and dont put as many next time

this is what i did with the same style a while ago

[The Fluffy Goat]

It definaitely needs some work, but I cant put my finger on exactly what's wrong with it. I dont like that there are so many lines, I think less lines and more color, somewhere..... :P

[DR809]

I'm not feeling it and the blue it's just too cool needs more work to be done. And the lines they just gotta go. Idk it feels flat. Like I said just keep working at it.