Deus Ex

[JimNibbles]

I saw Agitator's "Thorn Queen" signature and I loved the style so I tried to take some pointers from it and make it my own.

I tried to mimic light shafts through dust in the air with this one, and I more or less succeeded, I think.

Please help critique this one for me.

[cC.Remember♥Me]

Nice dept ^^

[JimNibbles]

Thanks! I appreciate that.

Anything you Voidsters think I should do to improve on it?