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Thread: A world.

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    Default A world.



    CnC?

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    Bump? :/

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    hmm is the planet like thingy a render?
    it's the focal, but not really well blended
    I think you should lose the lightening brushes, they don't really add anything
    the blue fractal-like things are nice, but a bit too many, so you may wanna lose some of them
    according to the render shadow, the lightening should come from the right upper corner, but it doesn't in this tagg
    you might wanna add gradient map(s) to help the color a bit, but it isn't that necesarry, and some effects like clipping masks would go nice

    Overal it sure isn't a bad piece, but there are some things that need to be improved

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    Tbh with you, the lightning is a render, and the blue stuff is a stock from the internet, and there are only 2-3 fractals, one around the planet, then another one bigger around it, and then again.

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    To be honest

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