Your yellow orb things are pretty poorly done and bland. The background is boring and I personally do not like the colors. Execution wise it is iffy. Your blast thing seems sort of just pasted in or smudged in.
make the middle emerge from your yellow orbs. and brush dark yellow on the bottom of them, and off white creamy colour at the top. Then smudge it in, so they look 3d. Change your bg colour to a burnt orange.
its a good start on something that could be good i think the yellow circles need to be worked on as lewk suggested and the blast effect would be better if they were coming from the yellow spots or disappearing from the yellow spots its a good start just keep workin on it man
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Originally Posted by Morbidsheep
