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    Default Bubbless

    shazzammm



    EDIT:

    hmm...things are still looking off when i upload them...but anywhoo cnc please

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    Last edited by `Knight; 09-07-2011 at 03:15 AM.

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    The orbs are highly distracting, they're drawing my attention away from the focal. You have some good blending going on though and the big orb as lightsource works.

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    Soft 2 / 3 px brush blue. on her neck and chin, bring attention back to her.
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    Your contrast is way too strong
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    Thanks guys, i posted a 2nd version

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    Better, seems like there is a failed clipping mask behind her as I see an arm. I'd erase all of that and work on your contrast and effects some more. Seems emptyish and the contrast near the top is still too high imo.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Morbidsheep
    Its probably because you c4d spam like everyone else. Where's the originality in that. You gotta try other stuff if you wanna go higher.

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