Nightmare

[xSorrow-]

I made this sig for a battle on another thread, cnc would be apprecieated !

[Garis]

I am going to sound harsh, sorry, but this is necessary if you want to improve yourself.

Firstly, the render isnt blended at all. There is no depth in this signature and there is not flow. These three things most often are the key to succesful signature.
Also, background looks too emtpy. Just black background with some C4D's.
And the text looks.. way too simple. Very boring. That little text just don't fit here.
And unfortunetly there's nothing more in this sig. No details, no effects.

Well, then I first came here, my sigs were even worse I think, but through time I believe I quite improved myself.
So I suggest you to read some tutorials here, try out some stuff and do a lot of experimenting. It helps.
Hope to see you soon, don't give up!

[xSorrow-]

Thank you for your honest opinion Gar