Raptor CNC

[midgetboytom]

Just wanted a bit of CNC on this one because ive been learning off my own back pretty much but now ive found this forum thought i could get a bit of guidance.

[KroniiK]

- Color flow works well with this tag
- Text could be worked on
- Top Right side is kind of empty compared to the left side
- Top Right is a bit blurred ??? on the raptor...which kinda don't look good (personal opinion)
- KiU
- 7.5/10

[JoShO]

Well, remember: Background, background effects, render/stock, foreground effects, adjustments etc.
In this there doesn't really seem to be a background on the right side, there's not really many effects, there aren't any foreground effects, and there is definitely no adjustments and colours. Maybe if you added a few gradient maps/photo filters to get rod of the random colours, and try and get a better suiting c4d on the left.

I'd definitely suggest checking up on tutorials to get a better understanding in the steps of making a sig.

[midgetboytom]

Cheers for the quick response, ill have a look through some tutorials and use the same render then post here to see what i can come up with

[JoShO]

Good stuff man, make sure you do, I'm interested

[midgetboytom]

Ok i tried to do it in the order you said, grabbed a glance at a couple of tuts. Granted the left hand side is a bit empty but when i tried something it looks sloppy. In the end decided to walk before trying to run and just want your opinion on what ive done

[JoShO]

Slightly monotone, but the flow (which is pretty difficult with that render) is good, so there's a start.
But at glance, the colours are simple the colour of the render and then white, it needs another colour. Look up complementary colours and then you can find out what colours go well with green to make a good looking sig.
Also needs a wow factor, something else, it's not too easy to work with a render like that.