focus is really shallow.. front is sharp.. back is really blurry.. theres no midground.. effects are okay. a little straight... make them a bit more wavey (it looks nicer on the eye)
The rest isnt too bad.. colour is decent... the lighting is off but thats hard to master.
Too blurred, you have to realise blurring the **** out of a background doesn't make depth.
Add some things to the background. Too plain at the moment, and too contrasted at the focal.
New style for me
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Originally Posted by Syn
