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[eXcell]

Text is horrible i know but cnc welcome as always

[sirenzo]

i see improvement tho your colors can use some work and your lighting and id try really hard on your depth . and yes lose the text . for starters its too far from your focal point .

[Maietrix]

Yea I agree with sirenzo, and work on your foreground fx, try and blend the render in better it looks like its just on top of the background ya know, KIU

[eXcell]

Thanks guys really appreciate it