i like the fx, except for the white blob on the right and the random pink stroke.. you need more bg fx, sure there is depth but little is going on making it kinda of plain and empty. i'd remove text, or if you want to keep adjust to make it look better. remove the white and pink, smudge the focal or bg a bit, add some fx to the bg. lighting is interesting, i think it works. you should work on the tag a bit more and re-post a second version. btw, where'd you get that render? i like :s
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