Magical Kiss Tag

[KroniiK]

as always trying out new things.

[cs4pro]

Watch the quality of the tag.
It's your main problem here imo.
Everyting looks too sharp and a bit overcontrasted.
But mainly too sharp....you really need to town down that a bit.

Also I think you should fix the lightning a bit.
I'm liking the lightningspots, but I think you should create some
darker shading around the whole tag.

The text is pretty fitting but also stands out pretty much.
It takes away some attention from the focal wich isn't really good.
Try to blend it in a bit more to make it less noticable when looking at
the tag for the first time. You may try to give it some other colors or
you may wanna try using clipping mask.

I'm liking the effects of the tag. Good job on that.
Also liking the use of colors. Flow works out pretty good
aswell imo.

Overall pretty good job, just need a few fixes.
Keep working at it

[KroniiK]

I'll work on it...and hopefully post v2 later.

[Vicious Zen]

Cs4 said it pretty much perfectly. I also don't know how I feel about it being so small. I feel like there's a lot of details I'm missing in this because of that.