This sig just isn't working D=

[Distello]

Ah what is going wrong here xD I figured this would be a pretty sweet render to use but theres so many dark areas that its rather hard to work with.
C&C? I'm completely stumped as to what to do with it - or is it just one of those hopeless failures? D=

[twohigh]

looks a bit over contrasted.. focal is in the middle, a no no.. no color flow, text don't flow, no flow period. bokeh is like waahht? redo.. word.

[cC.DOMINO™]

ya it looks like about 20 steps ago you made a mistake and just kept going with it making it worse. I suggest posting the .psd so we can see what you actually did here so we can tell you specifically where you went wrong. but it needs some work.

[Distello]

Completely agree, must have restarted this sig several times already - might just give up on the render.