Hey! Look at this !?

[kaay]

Hey im new to gfx and i wanted to see if i could get a cnc?
Thank you !

[cC.DOMINO™]

very nice for being new to gfx, better than most just starting. The colors are awesome, the size is a bit large for a sig but it's better for quality of the focal so perhaps just cropping it down to say 450 x 250 pixels or something below 500x 300 for a sig.
The c4d's in the corners distract from the focal of the guys head. Try erasing them or moving them closer to the guy and darken and blur your corners to bring your focal out a little. The composition of your focal point is dead center of the piece which tends to put people off a little, search for "rule of thirds" for composition help. the light stuff behind him is neat, could use some blending and some repositioning to help flow a little more and not distract from face. the block on left and right could be cropped off, remove the white lines and it would help this piece greatly. GL and hope to see more from ya.

[sirenzo]

i dunno what he says above and i thought looked cool like this but lose the lines going through it .

[Allseeyineye]

If you smudge the arms a little to the outside on the blue and green spots, with grungy smudge settings, it would definately be awesome for the blending

For a beginner, It's really good
as said: lose those white lines

and for your next tagg:
- make it a bit smaller
- make sure the focal is not in the middle off the canvas

KIU dude

[Distello]

As said above, the white lines are to go xD
I feel there could be more added to it, like more on the way of C4D's etc.. Also use a small canvas size.
I don't think theres much wrong with having a render in the centre (even with all that rule of thirds stuff), I know its frowned upon in the graphic world but I guess if its done properly it could work. (Yes I'm only saying this because I realise all 3 of my sigs are centred xD *ahem*)

Great sig though!

Edit: Ah so many of my sigs are centred xD FML

[kaay]

I used the same guy that's in your signature :P CnC this for me will ya? :O

[enable]

Don't forget to give Slavory some credit for producing this epic tutorial!

Nice work on the pieces guys.

[cC.DOMINO™]

hey kaay, you should start a new thread for each new piece that you make so that you get accurate cnc for each piece and not get confused about which cnc is for which piece.