I really like this one!

[BuBBlez]

Tell me what you think.

[Distello]

I think its a bit hard to distinguish the render from the background. But aside from that your right, it does actually look quite brilliant.

[Linda]

i like it, i just wish it had better colour to it.
Light is nice and its well blended but , as i said u must give more colour to ur focal render, so it wouldbt be so hard to sort it out from bg ;]

[BuBBlez]

Thanks for the suggestions guys. Ill be sure to work on it more

[.Void]

Monotone and too bright.

[Fork]

Just give the background a little bit of a blur