CnC Please, Not done yet but will be :)!

[Pandora]

Been working with this one at work, I know its not good but will you CnC?

[Pandora]

Bump <_<

[BuBBlez]

I think you used too much Topaz on the render.

[cc.mio]

I like topaz in this one. Makes focal really interesting, shame it is monocolor..

[damien]

Render looks weird and animated. Not a fan of that.

[Slave]

I do like the amount of shade in this piece, lots of grey in between all the black and white, tho I think it could do with some stronger white in this piece.

Pandora I am seeing a habit from you and I don't think it's for the best.
You seem to always place your focals too far to the left or right, always leaving so much empty space not played with. I would strongly suggest to use up more of the space/cut off half the dead space/ or move your focal more to center.

I also agree with the above comments, this image has too much topaz, it is very strong and makes important details look messy.
I would suggest leaving topaz out when it comes to rl images if you haven't got a good setting yet that you know how to manipulate.

[Pandora]

Thanks guys!

[+s9.Oath]

i agree with slave on this totally if u use topaz i wold wait till the end when u are done and dont want to do any more stuff to the tag and dont use too much then it doesnt look like a real person anymore it will look animated like in this one

[Pandora]

It is suppose to look like its animated, thats what I think looks night @Slave I am putting Text in on the Right side!

[007:Ank]

Tooo much topazy outlines goin on maybe tone down it a bit. :3