gifty elle

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gifty for a member of another bord...

[Slave]

LOLy name is Elle so I got curious wondering who you are :P

It's very sweet and I love the lights, I like how you are using your c4d more as a prop then a filler, but imo it is taking much more attention then your girl because it is much more sharper then your girl is.. I would suggest either moving it closer to your focl or placing more around your focal and changing the angle of the c4d on the left and usig the blur tool slightly.

Your text is pretty wicked, but again it's like it's stealing the lime light here because it's so into focus more then the focal is. I would suggest also moving this closer to your girl or to take out most of the text or all.

Nice gift tho I'm sure other Elle will like it ^^

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thank you for your feed ... and she's very happy about the poison ...