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  1. #1
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    Default First Wallpaper Attempt: Untitled

    Made using 4 images, 5 brushes, and insomnia.



  2. #2
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    Looks really impressive...
    i like the colours... but i think the "flying human" looks kind a misplaced though...
    i would have liked it more without him ^^

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    Might have came out better if you lowered her and made an impression from her falling or something; like a break in clouds. idk

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    Agreed, lose the girl and also try to clean up the merger between the field stock and clouds, theres a line inbetween them that looks really sharp and doesn't give the piece much credit.
    To do this I would recommend using another cloud stock and building up the lightness, anything like a blur tool will probably just look silly.
    Well done!

    One of the sexiest tags I've ever seen, from Radillac <3

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    Green skies would work better if you had a tornado going on, your field is way over sharpened and you lose the character to the backdrop. If you want to make your character look as if it is falling you need to give it something that will emphasize that. For example some very suddle motion trails or something would make all the difference. Otherwise the brain wont relate it to falling and you will spend your whole time looking at it wondering why it looks like that subconsciously. You need to color correct your scene to because making things unrealistic without a reason is NEVER a good idea. Doing things to just do them will throw people off 100% of the time. This could look good, you just really need to sit down and look very closely at the small details because the over sharpening just isn't working for you. (look at your birds for example, the pixels around them are all messed up due to too much sharpening.)

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