Venom(feedback?)

[h3rald]

I was watching the tutorial thread and saw the Tuts are Dumb post. This is my try at making the venom tag.



And a small edit I made, Laser Shooting Venom.

[ballin2much]

I like it. It's simple and I just like the colors on it. I feel the first one is loads better than the second one IMO.

[h3rald]

second one was just joking...

[Gravity]

can you post the original render link so i have a reference? thankss

[h3rald]

Got it from bakarenders, the site of Slavory: source

[+s9.Oath]

v1 is better but there doesnt look like there is much to it tbh man it needs something to stand out in it

[Gravity]

it looks to me like you took the render and flipped it, then added some smooth black c4ds on a black background. needs something. get some red in that sig

[h3rald]

lol. this was in the tutorial thread. just make a background placing the render around and then place the render resized. then add a effect c4d, effects and you're done.