Fighter Signature

[Shniper1337]

i deleted every render, c4d, etc. from my computer to make room for something there is still not enough room for so i had to get all of it back -.- that took a while but now im back into GFx. Heres my latest, CnC please

[Dolce]

It's good. I like the flow a lot, and I like the blending in the bottom left corner.

Some things to work on : the render, other than the bottom left corner, looks very "on top" of the tag, like it's just pasted in. Especially around his hair. Try doing a little bit of smudging (not with a hard round, but with something like a slightly scattered chalk). Some of the C4D looking stuff feels a little too sharp, especially in the mid/bottom right, and also a little bit "pasted on". The other wire-frame looking renders feel really random, I'd drop those.

And some stuff you should add so it feels more cohesive is : a light source/lighting. This render looks like it could be lit from the top left, you can throw in a big soft brush up there on low opacity, maybe some soft light/linear dodge layers. After that you could darken the bottom right (opposite side of the light). You should also add some adjustment layers. Soft-light gradient maps, color/contrast, that kinda' stuff. It makes the tag feel more together.

Also you could try using some depth of field to fix up the sharpness. Like blurring the bottom right/background pieces with the blur tool, and sharpening the render itself.

[Distello]

Its very interesting, my only gripe would be some colour difference between the background and the render is needed to separate them a bit. Other than that nice tag man.

[h3rald]

with a little more work on the blending c4d&render/background, this could turn to be a beautiful piece.

[.Void]

You attempted to leave us? Why? :/ What did we ever do to you?