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    Web based art Web Design Homepage

    Any critiques would be very welcome.


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    I like it, its clean. Although i think if the grey is a little darker it would be nicer due to more contrast. Oh and btw the aspect of the youtube and twitter logo at the top banner isnt right

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    ok thanks for the advice. I"ll fix it up now

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    The font is too closely spaced in places. It needs kerning. The "Team?" is so closed spaced it looks like a different word. The middle section leaves little room for real text on the page, so it's content would be limited to links/headlines.

    If buying the app is the main focus there should be more prominent selling on the main page.


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    Quote Originally Posted by ratchetnclank View Post
    The font is too closely spaced in places. It needs kerning. The "Team?" is so closed spaced it looks like a different word. The middle section leaves little room for real text on the page, so it's content would be limited to links/headlines.

    If buying the app is the main focus there should be more prominent selling on the main page.
    Yes the middle section will be primarily links or short text. The "team' text was awkward, and I cleaned it up since then to a more professional font as well. As for the selling point being the app, the middle section w/ the 2 arrows will have pictures featuring the product, so that is on its way as well. Thanks for the advice

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    Ditch the bottom twitter and facebook lögo. Not needed since you already have them at the top. Unless you intend to input tweets and fb statuses in the small boxes.

    Clean and simple otherwise, just how I like it.

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    yes, we have feeds inputted in the boxes now... If you're interested to see it semi-live right now you can see it here: http://proximitiapp.com/

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    make it attractive..

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    thread digging much?
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    i dont see anything



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