master-chief halo 4 sig

[dj-h4t0]

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Sorry but as a big halo fan, been playing since halo CE. I'm not digging this at all.

The render have been pulled from the cover for the game and it just doesn't work with the rest of this composition. Wierd background to put with such character and I don't understand the C4D's in the background, they look like those wheels with suctioncups around them that roll down the wall. And what's up with the dead on pink/purple nebula like thing on top of the render? It draws every bit of atention away from the main focal wich should be the character.

The tag lacks flow and just looks messy. Keep at it and you will get it eventually.

[dj-h4t0]

that nebula thing is a plasma round that the chief is dodging

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that nebula thing is a plasma round that the chief is dodging

From what vehicle? I don't know if this is suppose to be "realistic"

[dj-h4t0]

i dont think u need that much imagination to figure out what it is and how am i supposed to fit a vehicle in that
it is just some plasma round shot from some location from some vehicle / covenant

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i dont think u need that much imagination to figure out what it is and how am i supposed to fit a vehicle in that
it is just some plasma round shot from some location from some vehicle / covenant

Do you play halo? I do and that doesn't look anyway it does in game.

Yes I'm picky, it's what I do.

[dj-h4t0]

dude i play halo reach at mlg level
all im saying is u dont need that much imagination to seits a plasma bolt

[dj-h4t0]

here see there pretty similar in my book u just its not exactly the same because i made it from scratch

[Wolvy]

I actually dig this loadzzz, the placement of the glowy thingy is my only complaint, maybe play around with different placements?

[ShakeGraphics]

I actually dig this loadzzz, the placement of the glowy thingy is my only complaint, maybe play around with different placements?

I agree with this entirely my only suggestion or criticisms would be I think it'd look better of you erased more of the right side of the spartan the fading part, also it would add so much if you tweaked the direction the plasmas fumes or "tail" is going an I recommend scrapping the plasma you have done and trying to give it more of an ethereal feeling because the way it looks to me it seems like the grenade is just moving way too fast and it sticks out way too much, otherwise great job really like the flow