Mecha Girl

[Jeordy]

Hey!

This is my first post in this section. Have been posting my other new stuff in my portfolio thread. Anywho, here's something I've been working on today that puts to use some of the stuff I've learned in the last few days.
One of my main focuses on this one was to be better with lightning.

Please please please cnc so I know what is and isn't good.

Thanks!

Without further ado:

[cC.ZaMa]

Feels a bit oversharpened. The lighting is pretty good and I like what you tried to do. Not digging the text. Other than that nice coloring but try to not center your render; it's better to have it a bit to one side.

[Jeordy]

Feels a bit oversharpened. The lighting is pretty good and I like what you tried to do. Not digging the text. Other than that nice coloring but try to not center your render; it's better to have it a bit to one side.

Thanks for the tips. Text is definitely something I need to work on, I used to just go overboard with it almost making the text my focal. Now I think I might be doing too little, or just not selecting the right fonts/placement/color combo.