You have a lot of negative space going on at the right, a bit too much on the left too. Plus it's kinda huge?
The effect on his back may look better if you move it left to make it look like it's radiating from him
I like how you've kept the text simple though, not bad for a beginner. well done
^Great what I think is an abstract giftie from Distello^
Jason Statham Sig
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