Too many random colours in this very dark piece that outshine even the render. See some of the colours would be alright if they weren't so distracting, but because there is so few colours the same or shaded, it overpowers the piece and just leaves your mind following the random blotches of colour.
You second thing you might want to fix up with this piece would be the lighting. The foreground is far too dark for what is going on in the background, and the render is so washed out with the white light that it looks monotone compared to the rainbow you have in the foreground.
My suggestion to you would be to tone down some of the colours, keep 1-3 and use them a little more often to replace some of the more random colours. My second suggestion to you would be to tone down the lighting in the background, allow the colours to come out more clear and to bring a little more lighting to the foreground, because afterall real lighting would in some places break through and shine.
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