Third smudge tag

[Hacio]

Hey guys,

Since I'm not a smudge kind of GFX'er I thought let's give it a try.
I would love some thoughts of you guys about it, I don't know what to think.

[HrC]

You mind sending me the render that you used? Thanks

[cC.Agitator]

use bigger strokes, try not fading each tail off.

[.Void]

Work on the flow and color scheme.

[Hacio]

Thanks you guys for replying.