Gas Mask Girl

[JROD707]

PSD - http://www.mediafire.com/?tn7b337wu813ums


CnC ?

[Allseeyineye]

I actually love this, because of the atmosphere and great execution!
I love the colors aswell
my only remark is about the rule of thirds: Never place you render in the middle!
you can google "rule of thirds" for more info about that

Great piece!

[)85(]

looking good. could of been more effects at the bottom and the background lightened up alittle.

[Chr1sby]

The color needs to be more fleshed out, I think. it feels like you threw a sepia filter over it or something and it's taking away from the awesome colour palette from this one. Take a sample of the colours, brush onto the areas intended on a different layer, then set to "color" in photoshop, and you'll liven that color up. Should help you out. a b&w gradient map set to overlay or soft light should give you a little more depth as well - but you should strive to throw some of your own elements in to add some more dynamic depth.

I love what you've done with the background, and I personally prefer breaking the rule of thirds for this particular piece - the symmetry is working well and if you add some more effects to exploit that, I think you've got a good tag here.

I'll be around if you need anymore help.

[ratchetnclank]

I actually love this, because of the atmosphere and great execution!
I love the colors aswell
my only remark is about the rule of thirds: Never place you render in the middle!
you can google "rule of thirds" for more info about that

Great piece!

Rule of thirds is a guide, as with all rule's it's not a necessity to obey.

[Nutter]

Rule of thirds is a guide, as with all rule's it's not a necessity to obey.

With an image like this there's no problem with having it located in the center of the sig.

To be honest the coloured version looks really good.

[JROD707]

Thanks for the feed back guys

The color needs to be more fleshed out, I think. it feels like you threw a sepia filter over it or something and it's taking away from the awesome colour palette from this one. Take a sample of the colours, brush onto the areas intended on a different layer, then set to "color" in photoshop, and you'll liven that color up. Should help you out. a b&w gradient map set to overlay or soft light should give you a little more depth as well - but you should strive to throw some of your own elements in to add some more dynamic depth.

I love what you've done with the background, and I personally prefer breaking the rule of thirds for this particular piece - the symmetry is working well and if you add some more effects to exploit that, I think you've got a good tag here.

I'll be around if you need anymore help.

Wow thanks, now this is what I call a constructive criticism. I needed that.
Thanks again, I will try doing this in my future tags.
I'll hit you up if I need more help
+REP

[.Void]

Feel like you could have done more with the atmosphere.

[Ma12auder]

Love this one

[Maruk]

I like the colored one, maybe the lighting could be a bit better, but looks great. The B&W one needs more work with depth/contrast/lighting