vector sig attempt

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never tried this style before. this is what i have so far. how can i improve on this.

[Hagen]

So you take a dude that is suppose to look "hard"/"thug" and make him shit flowers and pretty colors?

[!!!~GHOST~!!!]

i dont know man, like i said its a first for me. all styles had to start somewhere.

[Hagen]

Hahaha I was drunk when I posted that, not trying to be rude. It is good advice though, look at how to incorporate things with the render or style you want. Vectors generally have a clean feel and flow well. This just has what appears to be vector brushes? or premade shapes added in mass quantity in hippy colors. Learn how to make these shapes on your own, how to incorporate colors, research for inspiration and keep producing . A rough start but keep at it!

[.JD]

Okay Way too big... try like 350x130/150 and learn to blend and get a concept of how to flow your c4d's with your Render, and then mess with the colors a bit, i know this all makes no sense but read tutorials man and i promise it will help... follow the tutorials dont just read them incorprate alll different tuts into 1 piece to make something spectactular.

[LongShot]

its a little too big and the image looks distorted, try to encompass your render, somewhat like this:
(gifted to me by and old member of PR)
with the vectoring. Female stocks/renders are more suited for the vector style, like these:
(my own vector sigs)


or like:
(sigs i bought on PR for FR lol)

[!!!~GHOST~!!!]

awesome, thanks for the help guys

[Derosion]

tip: don't use brushes unless it perfectly fits what you're doing

[Zell]

Looks like your stock got kinda skewed with the canvas. The way you moved the focus over to the right is a good idea but you're gonna wanna think more in layers of depth. Right now it's like everything is blurry cept the stock, when you have some other vectors that are on the same plane (or layer of depth) as the stock, and they're blurred unnaturally. Try to establish your foreground, middle ground, and background a little more on the next one. Good start though man!