Trying out tha smudge :P

[Devillien]

I am not a pro with smudging :P



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[Jackim]

sig looks great, but text is meh, I'd try to blend it in a bit more, and I feel like that second font doesn't fit very well

[Devillien]

oke cool thanks for the comment :-) ill try to edit the text

[Devillien]

tryed somthing with the text :$

[ColdCut]

Practice makes perfect with smudge so keep at it.
As for the text its looks much better than before.

[Devillien]

thanks Coldcut yeah i dont always know how to set the settings on the brushes so i do random stuff :P

[Xelo]

there are some vertical and horizontal white lines at both sides that disturb the flow.
Try to avoid lines in a face (although sometimes that might actually work), makes her less pretty.
Text is to dark now.
I like the effects and the smudging.
good job!!

XL

[Strid3r 9Y0]

Colors, C4D looks good, though there's a color bleed from the one of C4D, above her shoulder. Text needs heavy work, smudging not bad, also clear the focal point, make sure no random lines run over, agreed with Xelo, about the lines. You are in the right track, just clear these little bugging pebbles.