mystery girl

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looks good. text looks too darkthough and out of place. possibly add a line under it or create a orange splash/splatter effect around it.

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This is a huge improvement from your usual style and quality Ghost
But you need to stop using those slapped on texts, text will either hurt or help your piece, so leave it out if it doesn't work well.
Your flow is all over the place tho, all the c4d has different directions. Try to give them all the same direction of flow, and match them with the displace-filter effects.
The left side also is a bit empty.
But as I said, this is a huge improvement, keep going man and you'll be great in no time!

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thanks, this one was difficult. i was trying to take on a new style and im also not used to using renders that look as if they are stationary. i still have the psd for this one so ill attempt to try some of your suggestions into this.

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Radillac, i was able to make the text blend a little better but im having trouble with the c4d i tried a bunch of stuff out but it just didnt look right. if i sent you the psd could you give me an example of what you would do to make it look better. for learning purposes of course.

heres what i was able to do to the text.

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Of course man, pm it to me.

For text, always use simple fonts, not hand writing and cursive. The font shall be easy to read and not steal focus from the focal.
Example on clean fonts, blending and colors▼












Al tags by me, so let me know if you want more in deep details about text

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i sent it to your msn email. couldn't figure out how to send it on here. i like the text on your eddie riggs sig.