double focal

[ColdCut]

That was the theme on another board

[skythreader]

I know that some people might see me as a little harsh but I say what I need to say. First of all, the signature is very dull. Dull, in a sense that the coors are too relaxing that it doesn't grab attention too long. Red and Green match but the Orange threw me off. I gues you tried blending both BG and Render? The blend is too noticable. Try using GM (Gradient Map) on the BG to blend it to the render, instead of blending them together at the same time. Finally, the text seems to be placed on the wrong spot. Move it a bit higher.

I might be wrong but I would say you should try revising this. It's a well done Sig, you can bet on that, but improvements should be made to make it an even better one!

Cheers!

P.S. I hope you dont hit me for critiquing your work