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[Paulaner]

I was praticing on making a focus. Flowing with depth n such things. I failed a little on that on my previous thread. Is this better you think? Rate pls


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[Provided]

Colors are washed out in both versions, lighting needs, work use some soft brushes to make it more natural and put the effect on linear dodge add. It's a bit over-blurred here and there making the mask stand out too much. Remove the motion blur effect it's counter flow and just doesn't look good. Finally remove the border. Keep working at it