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  1. 06-28-2013, 05:30 AM #1
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    Made this late last night. Spend a lot of time on the text and I still hate it. Fuck text!



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    It lacks depth imo.
    you need to work on space in the Z-direction.
    The render suggest floating in space.
    Space is 3D. your tag looks 2D.

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    Interesting comment. Depth is usually one my strong points and even though I tried a few things out I don't think I changed that much regarding depth. Frankly I don't see it, but there must be something to make you say that so I'll keep it in mind.


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    Smaller cropped version:



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    I disagree with xelo, there def is depth there without a doubt, you need more of a darker atmosphere and your light source doesnt quite fit, use a c4d as a light source next time.

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    Old school c4d work nice I like it.
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