SteamPunk Zoe Tag

[Indicon]

I know the gun is a bit too blurred but other than that any other tips?

[ShadowzX000]

There's practicallly no depth and you shouldn't use the lighting effect to create lighting. Try also to fix the colors as well, but not too bad.

[BonesMa]

I like the concept. Areas that could do with some work: seems a little to dark in areas, over sharp in places and my focal is all over the place. Keep working at it good start.

[cC.ZaMa]

There's practicallly no depth and you shouldn't use the lighting effect to create lighting. Try also to fix the colors as well, but not too bad.

Lighting effect works wonders imo, just needs the right erasing etc.
But yeah pretty much what Shadow and Bones said.