Hardened Platform tag + 1 epic typo

[Strid3r 9Y0]

Well this is a tag with the Geth Juggernaut from Mass Effect 3 (or rather the multpiplayer). However and not for the first time I see I made a typo in the text (hardenet ... OMFG). Still it's a recent experimentation with C4D and 'lil smudge.


PS: Seriously this typo is driving me crazy... already closed PS and the project... fail..

[Xelo]

Yo Strider...

What are you attempting here??

the left and the right side don't seem anything to do with another
and then there is this white thing in the middle dividing them...
I mean ....?????

XL

[ShadowzX000]

Sorry, not feeling this one at all. Too much going on, and nothing really showing. That white thing in the middle, tops it off because it just divides the sig =/. Try to be clearer, and have something with more of a flow to it.