Maskara

[dakki]

please give comments and critiques.. thanks

[Maruk]

The lightning is too bright, use way more adjustment layers, i'd ditch the text. kiu

[cc.RadillacVIII]

The lightning is too bright, use way more adjustment layers, i'd ditch the text. kiu

↑This. It's over contrasted and too bright. Tone it down and make the colors more subtle and natural.
Other than that it's a good tag, just tweak to make it even better

[dakki]

thanks... noted masters...