To the Skies

[s0ggywaffls]

v2


My first work in about a year, so I'm pretty rusty. Any critiques or tips would be very much appreciated. Thanks!

Also, will work on fixing those clouds =.=

http://s0ggywaffls.deviantart.com/ar...kies-399863843

EDIT: Knew the clouds were pretty rough, but I'm looking at it now on my mbpr and realizing just how bad they are. I'll work on fixing them tonight :P

EDIT2: Took down v1 because it hurts to look ^^'

[BonesMa]

Soggy wow good to see ya!!

Love the image great piece to come back too. Looking at it seems a bit sharp in the top half of the image but works well.

[s0ggywaffls]

Wow long time no see! How've you been?

Haha thanks for the input :P

[Meddek]

The image is beautiful the only thing i can see is the center clouds seem a bit too transparent.

[s0ggywaffls]

v2:


This is all I have time to work on for now since I'm going out of town for a couple days, but I started working on the clouds a bit. I'll work on adding more volume to the top when I get back since they're a bit low right now.

[Meddek]

Looks like the start of something amazing with those clouds.

[Xelo]

nice job.. top is a bit boring; maybe give the "whatever it is that's flying up" something to go to??

XL

[sherryspencer728]

WoWW, The image is stunning. Transparency of center cloud seems too elegant and touchy Study more

[demolibium]

I dont know how you did it...... but whatever you did, i can't do. So i have to say its AMAZINGLY amazing (Don't look at me like that it must be something).