MUNDO

[Melody.]

Hey, this is my new work. I think this is my best.

[The Izaya]

Ohhhh, I like the text.

I think you could do a little more work on lighting. Shift the lighting to on top of him and burn the shadows and dodge where the light hits (which should be his upper area and a portion of his face).

[Nexoon]

The text really takes away the focus point, the render is really nicely chosen and the smudge and blending is really good ;0 I would change the colors of the background tho'