Trying to work on lighting and c4d placement. I think the one in front of her arm might be too big. I dont know.
So I went ahead and shrunk the c4d a bit. I think it looks better now.
Re-applied sharpen.
Someone on another forum noted that they didn't like the c4d placed in fron of her. I moved it down a little.
Softened up the light sources to (hopefully) make them a bit more realistic.