Mah new site

[Pleymo]

Here is my new website
I used RH's tutorial, and Anika von Holdt brushes...
I hope you guys like it ^_^




http://www.rockstar.nl.tt


ow, and btw, this is the old layout, i like this one more, because it's so clean

[Dick]

link , updates on right, and site title are unreadable ......

I would make links light grey, and give them mb white hover state or sumthin to light it up.... Updates more lighter than theyre, and title much bigger and some really light shadow....


at all : i think it looks nice, but i really dont like using brushes in layouts, IMO it looks unprofessional ( i dont say im professional lol ) and its unnoticed....

Edit : make text smaller

[Spekta]

Even though i can understand most of that, an English version would be helpful.

[Quickdust]

Nice but font title is almost unreadable, (ik ben blij dat ik nederlands ben, dan is de site een stuk duidelijker) :P

[NightStalker]

i agree on the font stuff so unreadable... if you gonna use that in future and content would get longer and you have to use frames which would be gay anyways it's good.. i think

[Pleymo]

Are there more people that want to drill my site totally in to the ground?
Does nobody looks to the brushing or something? Only iew, that text is thick fatt, ugly and unreadable?

Man...bas***** except dick, he gave same good advice :&#39

And btw, I can read it, do you guys need glaces?

[Zeyne]

Its pretty cool..There is a problem with the layout. Go to the bottom and go to the word "Trademark" and you will see it, its like out of place too high.

I like the old version better tho, but gj

[KlngMe]

Very nice, the navagation text is hard to read

[Spekta]

Okay, before you start getting your knickers in a knot because of some bad criticism, how about you actually look at it for yourself and figure out whats wrong, or dont have a go at us because we tell you whats wrong.

First off, the menu text is absolutely horrid and totally conflicts with the style of site, it's also too large. Not to mention you should get a proper host instead of freewebs due to restrictions.

The idea of a background content area image is totally useless, theres no reason to it, it just makes content text harder to read and totally takes focus off everything else.
Also, the whole monochromatic style isn't working at all and is totally dull and boring.

And on a final note, try getting your whole site content finished before asking for advice on it, and next time you get some harsh critisicm, dont be an ass about it, take it and use it.

[Dick]

Originally posted by Pleymo@15 Hours Ago
Are there more people that want to drill my site totally in to the ground?
Does nobody looks to the brushing or something? Only iew, that text is thick fatt, ugly and unreadable?

Man...bas****** except dick, he gave same good advice :&#39

And btw, I can read it, do you guys need glaces?

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wewt thx im happy that i helped