A short poem

[Deadloader]

A poem (only found out this section was here because i decided to actually read)

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"Let Go"

These days are numbered, the counting....
The disbelief in your voice as you wish us good luck,
The words you say as you wallow in tears,
The way you look at me with hatred and in a loving way..
you smile, you smile with fear and realise...
These days are numbered, and the counting ends.

[ilovecoheed]

That's great man. What was going on in your mind when you wrote this?

[Deadloader]

Hate and Love, and that feeling you get when you know that things will be alright but then when they end you dip back down...

*bump* was going through my mind

[Samuel]

I like it. That theme is kinda run down. O well, still good =D

[Deadloader]

thank you i was thinking of that but can feelings be put into a theme? i know it's all about sadness, death and all that crap but you can't measure a persons feelings right? (not a rant more of a forceful question :lol: )

[Samuel]

Actually i agthered this pome was about time. And how age is part of that?

Not about death and sadness. Still good tho, good work.