Intoxication

[ZeroX]

i wrote this one for a school project and took first place.

The 40
The fifth
The pint
The dip.

The roll
The pipe
The herb
The knife.

The will
The cut
The wound
The blood.

The regret
The pain
The hurt
The INSANE.

[Shamino]

The writing is very plain, very very plain. I can't grasp what you are getting across because its too all-over-the-place, and it seems recycled.