Poster Design - Godskitchen; Feedback Wanted

[aBiTTERSWEETdemise]

hm; i'm not a big fan of the font, but it's alright.

maybe spell out the 6 in 'exclusive 6 hour set'? or was it just me who thought it said 'ghour' at first ;p

other than that, it's great! i love it ♥♥

[Shadow]

maybe spell out the 6 in 'exclusive 6 hour set'? or was it just me who thought it said 'ghour' at first ;p

Now that you mention it I thought it said ghour too lol. Space out the 6 hour, or try a font that is close to the Godskitchen font.

[Papa]

I would try adding a little more to the backround. Or binging the little orange ray thing up a bit and croppying the postersize.

Also do what they said above^^. Lol it looks a lot like ghour.

ANd welcome to the void

[crs*]

Thanks to everyone for the warm welcome and the great feedback from you all
Its greatly apprieciated and definately well received.

I shall make a few small alterations one last time and then post it on here
Cheers guys

[Skatanic_]

Im not keen on the back round could you try a flat black one?

[elmiguel]

teh yellow thing it the bottom is nice and all, but her eis the thing.
You cant really see who is going to play, yes the logo means a party or so. Take in mind that the most important here to communicate is who, when and what. Posters are not to show the designer signature. Think of the movies, a poster that will make you want to see it is one that captures you.
An example is the Clockers Poster.

[crs*]

elmiquel i totally understand where you are coming from but for this poster ive tried to capture a certain theme to the overall design more than just getting a point across.

Personally i think when you look at the design every element on it comes together to create this feel of energy which is exactly what clubbing is about
Its just my view though lol :P

Although i do totally agree that for some people the font might not be clear at all which can be a problem if your trying to advertise something ^^ lol

[Daemon_]

Including some white highligts in the pattern on the bottom would make it a lot better.