new one

[ghostbane]

its in my sig already

yea i know the border suhks and the lightings off but give me some more ideas to fix it up because i kinda like this one

[Light]

Increase depth by adding some shadowed areas on the background, try to use more colours, it's pretty monochromatic...Well also size is a bit over the top but it's still ok nothing to worry about.
Just try to improve it with more depth and make the background a little more interesting, a pair of C4D renders might help =)

[ghostbane]

i did it again changed a bit of stuff




it might be just me but i like big sigs

[Chucks]

Definitely some improvements, but I think you should make the render bigger, like version one. It would look better imo. You should work on lighting now :P

I like big sigs too

[Light]

Yeah new version is the way to go, as Chucks said i'd keep the render size you did in the previous version and keep working on it..
Good job so far..

[ghostbane]

yea i finally think im done

[Chucks]

Definitely better, but I think the BG's overcrowded (just my opinion). I don't like the text but we all suck at text so bugger that. Lighting is also another problem.

But it's getting better, just needs a few tweaks and stuff like that.

[~FireTap]

Personally, I'm liking this version the best so far



No text + multiple related colors + some depth = good looking.

It needs some smooth lines that contrast the rest of it though.