Did i miss something aka girl trip

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[Jefster]

I think it would be better if it said "she" or "she's" instead of "she has", and the text was aligned centrally rather than left.

The artwork is very cool. Very different. Love it.

[Chaotic Cow]

I think it would be better if it said "she" or "she's" instead of "she has", and the text was aligned centrally rather than left.

The artwork is very cool. Very different. Love it.

What do you mean? I Like it I odnt' see any 'She'

[rand0mhero]

Wonderful tag.

[Jefster]

What do you mean? I Like it I odnt' see any 'She'

The speech bubble says "I bet she has forgot somethin".

I think it would be better if it said either "I bet she's forgotten something" or "I bet she forgot something". It's just a more natural speech pattern. Not many people would say "she has" in normal speech, unless they wanted to emphasize something a person had actually done. In that case the emphasis would be indicated in text by italicizing the word has; "I bet she has forgotten something".

Come to think of it, it might be better if it were a thought bubble rather than a speech bubble, because it seems more like a private thought than the sort of thing one would say out loud.

[Chaotic Cow]

I still dont see it

oh nvm removed text

[Spluff]

V2 = Creamable.

[Slim]

i really like the second one with the warmer colors, they seem more appealing to me. very good. i wish i was that creative.

[Smiling Demon]

really really cool... great creativeness.