SpiderMan

[Breäkdown]

Followed Ratchets infamous tut, i think it turned out pretty good.

[Ptka]

Very nice, I really like your use of the motion blur, it looks good. The background is really awesome and those clipping mask are great. The light source is a bit bright so maybe turn that down a bit, and I don't really like the text. Spiderman sig=Spiderman text.

[Breäkdown]

Thanks for feedback, ill work on lighting and text, text seems to be my weak point.

[Ptka]

Text is everyone's weak point, try checking out Papa's Text Tut here: http://www.gfxvoid.com/forums/showthread.php?t=45209

[Papa]

The coloring on this one seems a bit off. I can't really figure it out but the blue of spidey really doesn't go well with the greens and stuff of the BG. I would use a gradient map or somehting and try to work them together.

Also i think you should Try cutting spiderman out better it seems liek theres a halo of greena round him, i don't know if thats from the stock or from coloring but i'd get rid of it.