Hellgate

[dave9339]

Hey guys new sig CnC please





Thanks .

[dave9339]

commments ny1 no?

[Lewk]

Too busy effects everywhere too tall Text is okay Very monotone, blurred too much in the background, doesnt blend terribly well.

[TeasingTemptation]

I think it's a bit out of focus. There are areas too blurred and others too sharp, I actually had a bit of trouble finding out what the actual render was until I looked a little closer.

It's also a bit big, and I'm not a fan of the text.

I do like the lighting very much though.

[Scrib]

lighting and text is awsokme but i think its too blurred keep it up man

[zole]

Hmm over blurred dave :S i use to get comments on that all the time :S try not to use as much blur or not use it at all mate :S its to monotone add a colour balance and add some different colours and photo filters the text is ok it seems to sharp maybe change the text to smooth version of it also the "Dave" text doesn't fit in :s try and find some text that blends in with the tag The lighting is very good on this tag but the compo is not :S he is facing out of the tag and behind him is the empty space :S he should be facing right which would be good compo

I have used that stock before here was my turn out of it :



Mine was abit overtopazed like xD

[Bob_magic]

it's too sharp in some areas and too blurred in others. you know you're too sharp when you get the steps of doom, (zig-zag effect on diagonal lines) liek on the helmet crucifix.

it seems too busy and parts of the helmet need toning down... too white.