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  1. #1
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    Default Silent photomaip bird

    Hey people. I need some advices from you here. Cuz' i'm doing a photomanip.
    But i'm not satisfied. I think it's a bit empty. So... What to do?

    Thanks in advance


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    the lighting on the beak is off imo, maybe remedy that?
    and maybe make like a flock, like put more in the bg

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    Yeah I agree with soggy here darken the underside of the beak and maybe add a flock.

    Great stuff tho.

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    yea it looks awsome and i was gonna say add darkness to the beak but the flock idea is awsome

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    nice one silent i agree with the beak though


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    Dont blend it in, really. When you are so close to it, no way you can see those clouds ABOVE the wings.
    Pay some attention to the lightning. The mouth-thing has no lightning while the wings do, which isnt logical But this is in general wrong with lightning. Other then that, nice concept
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    hehe, pretty nice.
    You did a great job blending the wings in.
    Only thing I don't like are the colors of the sky going to a darker green like that.



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    the lines need to flow more.. it's crooked.. imo bring the bird head up more to match the level of the tail piece

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    Thanks alot everyone

    Quote Originally Posted by Helix View Post
    the lines need to flow more.. it's crooked.. imo bring the bird head up more to match the level of the tail piece
    I followed the curve from the original nose of the plane.

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    The beak needs to be blended with the plane better.
    Yea, a flock would be great with this.
    I'm really not sure what else you could add besides that....

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